Someone made a drastic change to Kyouhei's page by dropping out every 'u' in his name and claiming it was spelled wrong. I reversed the changes and let the person in question know. I mentioned if they didn't believe me, they should come ask you. I mentioned it was how it is in Japanese and how it translates into English.
Hello NHunter, you are the one who colorized the picture of the Bismarck Twins? Would it bother you if I used the picture for my Arpeggio fan work? Of course I would take no credit for myself and would state that you are the one responisble of the colorized picture.
Akashi's sigil isn't like Vampire's anymore in the most recent chapters of the Manga it has been changed, its a half gear around a central dot not the Vampire sigil. You can see it when she is coming up the ramp at the naval base with Gunzou.
I noticed that a fandom user changed Takao's status to 'recovered' due to the movie. I think it should actually be 'rebuilt' because from how I remember the movie (Cadenza), Hyuuga used quite a few nanomaterials from Iwo to make Takao's new ship. Your thoughts on this?
Ran a clean-up on the manga pages-except for a few misspells and places where there should have been some capitalization they looked really good! Nice job NHunter!
(Also, I'm not mad at what you said-you were giving me honest feedback on my story. I would ask your opinion on it [besides the obvious issue you had]. Seriously, if I got angry at every person that made such a comment about my stories I'd be replying to those all the time instead of writing)
Just figured I'd let you know that I noticed a grammical error on Yamato's page with the new stuff you added-made it make a little more sense (That kind of thing is all I feel comfortable doing-so don't be surprised if you see my name popping up [I've done a lot of such clean-up work since I first came here...lot of misspellings and stuff]) Nice addition with the Naval Base btw!
That actually sounds like a good idea. Also, if you're fixing links, in some places titles (like ranks) should be captialized but they're not. If a name comes after the rank (like Captain [name]) it should be capitalized-I would do it but I tried it once and it messed with the link (if you're unsure where I mean I can list a few). Since you seem to know what you're doing you might be able to fix those where I couldn't. I will agree on the Manga, that page is too long and should be broken up
Looks good. I would ask a favor of you NHunter-you're obviously well-read on Arpeggio, would you mind looking over my fanfic and giving me your opinion (when you have time of course)? It's set about 25 years after the anime and movies and I've used this site extensively for research. I'll be updating every Tuesday and would love to know what you think of it. You can find it here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12204467/1/Fleet-of-Fog-A-New-Tide There's going to be a bit of possible AU (what else could there be with something that takes place after a series supposedly ends) but I've done my best to keep it fairly true to what I've seen
Oh well, anime section next? I'll need quite a bit of help there since I'm not well-versed in what happens there. Also, Iona's page should probably be split into main and a couple of sub-pages that describe her roles in manga and anime respectively - it gets insanely long nowadays. Takao's might need similar treatment as well.
And, do you know if "Salty Roads" has an English translation somewhere? - we should probably add info on that spin-off, but I can't read Japanese or Chinese. And trying to guess what's going on by pictures alone is not good.
Also speaking of fanfiction: since you want my opinion on yours, what do you think about thesetwo written by yours truly?
Sure NHunter-I'll give them a once-over. As for the pages, that's what the contents section is for-so people can jump right to where they want to go. Splitting it into two sections, to me, doesn't make a lot of sense.
(comes back from reading) You paired Gunzou and Kongou? That's an interesting one to be sure. Kongou's pretty much my fav character-I have a wallpaper of her in her outfit from the Cadenza movie on my computer (and one of her with a glowing red eye for my Gmail background). Also, interesting way of merging Mass Effect and AoBS (Arpeggio of Blue Steel)-you actually did a good job on it. To be honest, it's quite refreshing to see a story that's NOT giving me a headache with spelling errors and improper grammar. A little backstory on mine: The story follows Gunzou and Takao's daughter Selena Iona on her journey to find where she belongs. Selena sees the other Models of the group (Kongou, Haruna, Kirishima and Hyuuga) as her aunts and is very close to Kongou-their relationship will be explored in the story, mostly through flashbacks. Kongou is still...fairly cold to most people, but she has a close friendship and bond with her niece-she understands while Iona may have opened her heart to friendship (end of the anime), Selena is the one who showed her what the term meant. The co-author is my best friend and did Beta work for me on a previous story-he's more involved this time around so I give credit where due. Feel free to look into my other stories and let me know what you think (I am aware of a few errors in a couple of chapters that do need fixing but right know I want to write, not edit)
Did some fixes on the manga guide pages. Namely replaced the pure-html tables with ones using wiki-markup. Too tired to do much more today. As for splitting certian pages - well, in-page bookmarks are good, but, unfortunately, the table of contents stays at the top of the page. Google.docs (at least recently) made it appear on the side of the document, which is good. Here, though, if you want to read only sections #3 and #6, you'll have to jump back to the top of the page after you finish reading the section #3 so that you can go ahead and jump to the section #6.
I have one big problem with your concept: humans can't actually procreate with Mental Models. Any 'child' a Mental Model can ever have will be nothing more than a secondary avatar supported by the very same union core as her mother. Sorry, but I simply can't overlook this...
Then again, AU and whatnot. I'll admit, it's not pure canon. The concept, however is going to be used later quite a bit in the story. I think it would actually come down to technological advances, but hey, if people want to get nitpicky about it not being total canon (and I'm not saying you are Hunter-no worries) then they don't have to read further. You don't have to read further if you don't want. Thanks anyways
Hi NHunter, thanks to Animax showing this anime currently, I'm beginning to like it more. However, I noticed there's some weird (lack of better word) .. commentary in Kongou and some other pages, like "However, when she - now operating a construct looking more like the Death Star from Star Wars than anything else - caught up with I-401, the said submarine was about to engage in combat with American "Fleet of Fog". " Just wondering if such commentary is allowed? XD
Agreed - this IS not a professional way to describe things - but I honestly can't think of any other way to describe Berserk!Kongou without typing a paragraph or two of description. If you can think up something, feel free to edit/replace what I wrote there.